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Love; breathe it, free it.

Let it take hold of your soul,

Live in its embrace.
i'm addicted to writing haiku at the moment, i love how it has structure :kitty:

please help with punctuation!! and category?

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:icontsedek:
Tsedek Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010
I like this one. It's flows better than most haikus.
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:iconkay-johanna:
Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2010
thanks so much! :D :kitty:
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Tsedek Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2010
you're welcome! anytime.
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ShroudedTempest Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not very good at Haiku, but I love reading it :D
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MaikaFranklinCLW3 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Student General Artist
:icongwompplz: I LOVE IT! WELL DONE!!
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:iconkay-johanna:
Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010
thanks so much! glad u like it :D :glomp:
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MaikaFranklinCLW3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Student General Artist
ur welcome!!
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MidnightSun16 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer

Would it be too cheesy, if i said ... LOVE IT! ;]
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:iconkay-johanna:
Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010
hehe not at all! :D thanks!! :glomp:
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MidnightSun16 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, good. :)
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Rostosbelos Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
estou realmente impressionada, muito bom.
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:iconkay-johanna:
Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
agradece! :D :glomp: :kitty:
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
think you must go to Song And lyrics,or whatever it was.anyways,this is good even though it's short.I like this!
From me Sander
Founder of Emotional Club
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:iconkay-johanna:
Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
Thanks! :D :kitty:
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
you are welcome!
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Aaion Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful.
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:iconkay-johanna:
Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
Thanks! :D :kitty:
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AlecWolfe Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
grammatically the punctuation is fine. Can't help with category tho...I'm not a poet. But I do like this.
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:iconkay-johanna:
Kay-Johanna Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
Thankyou! :) :kitty:
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:iconalecwolfe:
AlecWolfe Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
you're welcome
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